You remembered all that from a dream? I was wondering what book it was from, so I could read it. It's good. Dream up more and put it into a coherent narrative.
Well, like I said, "remembered" was too strong a word... I had a few bits of turn of phrase and a core idea that I tried to make a pleasant and intelligible passage out of.
I remember wondering (bleary eyed, tapping into an iPad) if "languid" was a good word to describe the dry tank top in the sun, or if that word is too "wet".